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Dustin
Mar 6, 2010 11:47:01 GMT -5
Post by dustin on Mar 6, 2010 11:47:01 GMT -5
Name: Dustin Helmsley Age: 20 Race: Human Personality: Dustin in his home town was a prodigal mechanic. He can make something out of anything. If he can help, he will. He is somewhat quiet when you first get to know him, and he doesn't change very much the longer you've talked to him. Usually he is thinking about new ways to make an object better. He is a logical thinker, always using his own mathematical equations to figure things out in what he would consider to be logical. If you put a few pieces of metal in front of him, and an extremely dangerous creature on the other side of him to kill, he would find the time to make a weapon that could kill the beast in one hit - and it would only take a few seconds! History: At a young age, Dustin found that he loved talking to people. Even before he was in the safe house, he would go out and meet new people. In the safe house, he would make random things out of whatever was lying around. The thing that he is most proud of is his motorcycle. Now that he's in the wastes, he uses his creations to help others with his mechanical skills. Attack: 6 Defense: 5 Charisma: 0 Deception: 0 Accuracy: 4 Willpower: 2 Intelligence: 3 Lock Pick: 0 Mechanical: 10
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Dustin
Mar 28, 2010 14:42:52 GMT -5
Post by Sarena on Mar 28, 2010 14:42:52 GMT -5
Please update to latest requirements. You need to change: Background --> History
You need to add: Stats and values for them.
Also, your personality description deserves more work and at least a few more lines. Try to see if you can't work on this. While it's not a requirement it's certain good to have.
Thanks in advance Statistics Moderator Amaranth
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Dustin
Apr 10, 2010 8:51:58 GMT -5
Post by Sarena on Apr 10, 2010 8:51:58 GMT -5
It looks fine now, Accepted, the history can still use more, but it's not essential.
Amaranth
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