Post by hunter on May 2, 2010 22:35:13 GMT -5
Name: Hunter
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Raider
Personality: Anything to survive
Background:
Hunter was a good boy all of his life. While he was in the safeholds, he would do anything in his power to help the elders and his peers. By mistake, Hunter accidentally stepped on the toes of one of the leaders of the safehold. His punishment, eviction, active immediately. While he was shaken, Hunter still wanted to help people. Walking through the wastes, he saw what looked like a dog had it's head caught in some rubble. When he pulled the rubble of, he noticed there was a family of wild dogs living there. When he realized this was a den of wild dogs he realized his mistake. A ruthless attack began and when he woke up, he was missing one of his legs.
What seemed like days later, he heard a group of men walk up to him and start rummaging through his stuff. Using what was left of his strength, he grabbed one of the hands and yelled, "This stuff... is mine!!!"
When he woke up, there was a robotic leg attached where his old leg once was. Standing right beside him was a scruffy man standing there saying, "You got spunk kid, you'll fit in here just nice."
The next few years, Hunter was taught how to be a raider. He became an expert at getting what he wanted, by any means necessary.
Base Stats:
Attack: 8
Defense: 2
Charisma: 1
Deception: 3
Accuracy: 6
Willpower: 8
Intelligence: 1
Lock Pick: 0
Mechanical: 0
adminnote:Admin Note: Dear Hunter,
When I first read your unfinished background, I was going to ask you if you were a raider or a survivor. Now I see how you are going to be a raider, might want to add that in your continuation. Otherwise, this is a very good start.
Keep in mind:
Personality needs more detail. Might I suggest checking out the types of personalities on this site; www.personalitytest.net/types/descriptions/index.htm. Just change some words up, add a little more detail, and you're finished!
Also, don't forget your stats! Check out character creation for more detail.
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Raider
Personality: Anything to survive
Background:
Hunter was a good boy all of his life. While he was in the safeholds, he would do anything in his power to help the elders and his peers. By mistake, Hunter accidentally stepped on the toes of one of the leaders of the safehold. His punishment, eviction, active immediately. While he was shaken, Hunter still wanted to help people. Walking through the wastes, he saw what looked like a dog had it's head caught in some rubble. When he pulled the rubble of, he noticed there was a family of wild dogs living there. When he realized this was a den of wild dogs he realized his mistake. A ruthless attack began and when he woke up, he was missing one of his legs.
What seemed like days later, he heard a group of men walk up to him and start rummaging through his stuff. Using what was left of his strength, he grabbed one of the hands and yelled, "This stuff... is mine!!!"
When he woke up, there was a robotic leg attached where his old leg once was. Standing right beside him was a scruffy man standing there saying, "You got spunk kid, you'll fit in here just nice."
The next few years, Hunter was taught how to be a raider. He became an expert at getting what he wanted, by any means necessary.
Base Stats:
Attack: 8
Defense: 2
Charisma: 1
Deception: 3
Accuracy: 6
Willpower: 8
Intelligence: 1
Lock Pick: 0
Mechanical: 0
adminnote:Admin Note: Dear Hunter,
When I first read your unfinished background, I was going to ask you if you were a raider or a survivor. Now I see how you are going to be a raider, might want to add that in your continuation. Otherwise, this is a very good start.
Keep in mind:
Personality needs more detail. Might I suggest checking out the types of personalities on this site; www.personalitytest.net/types/descriptions/index.htm. Just change some words up, add a little more detail, and you're finished!
Also, don't forget your stats! Check out character creation for more detail.